I would be doing the writing. You would be the technical advisor, letting me know why some random plot element wouldn't work and why, so I could fix it before production.
[ He let him get tugged along, pretty sure nothing that wasn't just startling him would actually get a reaction from him in this 'haunted carriage'. ]
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[ Sly, conspiratorial. ]
I would be doing the writing. You would be the technical advisor, letting me know why some random plot element wouldn't work and why, so I could fix it before production.
[ He let him get tugged along, pretty sure nothing that wasn't just startling him would actually get a reaction from him in this 'haunted carriage'. ]