[she keeps her balance easily enough with the care he's taking in his movements, but she waits until he's settled before she fishes the bag of brightly wrapped sweets from her pocket and - with an air of great magnanimity - holds it out for him.
it's fair, given that he's sharing his seat. it's not that she enjoys the rush of having things of her own to share.
it's also not that she perks up when his opinions are positive. neither of these things are true and happening right now, nor is she leaning forward, eyes bright.
(she is.)]
The others say it's cliche, but there are lots of parts that I've never heard before, and there's so much of it!
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it's fair, given that he's sharing his seat. it's not that she enjoys the rush of having things of her own to share.
it's also not that she perks up when his opinions are positive. neither of these things are true and happening right now, nor is she leaning forward, eyes bright.
(she is.)]
The others say it's cliche, but there are lots of parts that I've never heard before, and there's so much of it!